New tracks , v youtu.be/J7Sm-N0R1iM?...

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Sure. Can't load a YouTube with the spotty service at work but will check out your art when connected to wireless. Stay creating!

Things..not thing. 😉🎶

Ok!👍

I’ve listened to the song, I’m just not into that type of music but props for trying and don’t give up on your dream push yourself as if life itself depends upon it. Good luck and wishing you the fame you deserve.

OK 🤷 Thanks for asking 👍🏽

Saw the video. Nice flow. Maybe speed the tempo, but you good my g! I don’t even like rap.

I like it how you are kind of against the beat at the beginning and then you totally go into the beat and then you're out of it again. Pretty good really. I never expect that much from people with music coming at me on social media but you got something.

Ok, about what?

His voice just gets you into a trance (a good one).

That needs reposting, I’m going to check it out on YouTube. 🌻🧚🏽‍♀️

You rock! ❤️

The beats and timing are great, hypnotic! Would you post your lyrics? Found you on YouTube, thanks for asking me to listen!

Yes Great Music story..🎸🎵🎶

Yes

I did look I don’t normally listen to rap so I’m not your audience but to me, as a non rap listener, I think you should be a Touch quicker The whole beat/your words Tempo?? The only rapper I know would be M&M You’re a touch slower at least on the song I heard - match his timing more

Sure

I really liked it. I also watched, “Tickn Time Bomb” 👍❤️

Done!

I will and get back to you. 👍

I checked it out on youtube

Not bad! ✊️

That’s great! Terrific flow! Thank you for sharing.

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You are quite welcome. Hope I helped.

I liked it. My son has kept me aware of rap like Jeezy, Sada Baby, Icewear Vezzo and Ice Cube. Still, I am not a seasoned judge. I liked yours cos it flowed and I could actually understand most of the words. Respect!

You have something going with the ryhme, the beat needs serious work. Collab with someone that can mix a beat!

To improve: greater rhythmic variety, greater energy in vocal line, broader lexicon, re-record vocals at slightly greater distance from mic to improve mix.

Really interesting. Did you make it? I hope you got to their dough 😂

Honest opinion?

Vdott Da Astronaut youtu.be/NE8SRJ-B8jw?...

Listened to for me to blow. So you popped out that door and bounced to the moon. I like it! My servers have been so fucked up that I never received the initial post and my feedback and feed forward have been hijacked, I think. Went out night before last for 16 hours. Thanks!

Never mind, found it on YouTube, listening to Pay Me For The Verse now. I like rap music enough, used to listen to Rap Rotation playlist on Amazon Music and piped it to my six speaker stereo. I like it because the message is positive and not criminal and street gang stuff.

Which track?, so I can request it on my Echo.

I like it, my only notes would be to up the mix on the backing tracks a bit, and to let that stream of consciousness flow. BTW why did i get chosen for the sample group?

Wow. Thanks Vdottda. ✌️💙&😊

Shout out too @laughingowl.bsky.social

I like it. Makes me feel like I’m spinning. My experiments in music are here. Most of it is pretty old. phonomoda.com