loading . . . Debut Flash: 'The Visitor at Blackthorn Station' by Yolanda Lynn Sheppard The train arrived at half past midnight, though no train was
scheduled at that hour. The fog was so thick it seemed to breathe,
curling around the iron rails like something alive. The lanterns along
the platform flickered awake one by one, startled from their sleep.
Clara
had not meant to be there. She had wandered from the inn after a dream
she could not shake — a voice calling her name, a promise whispered in
the dark.
The station was deserted, the ticket booth shuttered,
the clock frozen at twelve. Yet the train waited, humming softly, as
though it had been expecting her. The doors opened with a hiss. A rush
of cold air spilled out, carrying the scent of roses and old stone. No
passengers stepped off. No conductor called for boarding. Only silence —
and then a voice. “You’re late.”
Clara turned. A man stood in
the doorway of the nearest carriage, tall and elegant, his coat sweeping
the floor. His face was shadowed beneath a wide‑brimmed hat, but his
eyes gleamed like polished obsidian. “I don’t know you,” she said. He
smiled faintly. “No. But you knew me once.” The fog thickened, wrapping
around her ankles like affectionate hands. The train’s lights pulsed,
silver and soft, illuminating the name etched on the side of the
carriage: The Blackthorn Line. Her breath caught. “That line was closed
years ago.” “Not for me,” he said. “Not for us.” He extended a gloved
hand. “Your family made a promise. A vow sealed in blood and moonlight.
You carry their name — and their debt.” Clara stepped back, but the
train seemed to move forward, its hum deepening to a heartbeat. “I don’t
understand.”
“You will,” he murmured. “When you remember.” He
removed his hat. His face was pale, beautiful, and tragic — the kind of
beauty that hurt to look at. His eyes were endless night, and his
expression was not cruel but longing. “I waited,” he said softly.
“Through fire, through ruin, through every century that forgot us. I
waited for you.”
Clara’s pulse stuttered. “For me?”
“For
the one who would return.” He reached into his coat and drew out a
silver locket, tarnished and old. Inside was a miniature portrait — her
face, painted in delicate strokes, wearing a dress she had never owned.
“I painted this,” he said. “The night you left me.”
The fog
trembled. The lanterns dimmed. Clara felt the world tilt, memory
flooding back in flashes — a ballroom lit by candlelight, a waltz that
never ended, a kiss beneath the clock tower, and a promise whispered
against her throat: I will find you again. Her knees weakened. “You
died.”
He nodded. “And so did you.”
The train’s whistle
cried — low, mournful, like grief given sound. The man stepped closer,
his hand still outstretched. “Come,” he said. “The journey is short, but
the destination is eternal.”
Clara hesitated. The platform
beneath her feet felt less solid, the fog rising higher, swallowing the
world. She looked into his eyes — and saw not death, but devotion. A
love that had refused to fade. She took his hand. The train doors closed
behind her. The lanterns went out. And when morning came, Blackthorn
Station was empty again — except for a single silver locket lying on the
platform, its portrait newly painted.
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Yolanda Lynn Sheppard is a writer from Maryland whose work explores memory, atmosphere, and the quiet tensions that shape everyday life. She is a single parent to a 14‑year‑old son
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