@brettbooth.bsky.social could you help me with this running position? Having issues with the right leg. I twisted it forward way too much

@brettbooth.bsky.social I don’t feel like the foreshortening on the legs works for this pose. I want it to feel like he’s leaping off the building. I’ve tried a few variations but they haven’t worked. I feel like the pelvis should be foreshortened back into space more? Also not sure about the cape.

Non Stop Spider-Man #3 page 16. Penciled by Chris Bachalo and inked by me.

Hey Bluesky! I’m a 19 year old aspiring comic artist and I’m making my own comic, Amarok Here are some pages from it