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Where Haiku May Be Heading β 8 Predictions
At the Spring Equinox
https://medium.com/17-onji/where-haiku-may-be-heading-8-predictions-0d9fab94469b?sk=4c0e4859d631276de2bf20687b94bdb3
about 15 hours ago
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beyond the lake motorbikes roar - the heron's raised leg
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about 15 hours ago
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first butterflies β on silent gravel the click of pens
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I followed my haiku editing checklist β but missed the detail that makes the difference.
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The One Line I Didnβt Quite Fix
I followed my haiku editing checklist β but missed the detail that makes the difference
https://medium.com/17-onji/the-one-line-i-didnt-quite-fix-993fd5f46348?sk=c232b955a7c57b6e9ff6c97399cf3d8c
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New: The Haiku Editing Checklist 13 quick checks to help you decide whether a haiku is finished β or still needs work. Designed to be simple, practical, and fast to use.
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feather floats β crocus beneath his knee he stutters
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3 days ago
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morning cool β lily of the valley bend together
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4 days ago
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spring rain's drumbeat higher up the wall a new black line
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5 days ago
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early morning β in the plough's wake crows
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6 days ago
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matsumae park β sakura blossoms emerge to the click of cameras
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7 days ago
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spring bird song the dry mouths of young musicians
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8 days ago
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fishing village β on basalt rocks damp seaweed
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9 days ago
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The Step Most Haiku Writers Skip
Why the best haiku are rarely written in a single sitting
https://medium.com/17-onji/the-step-most-haiku-writers-skip-dee44e6a274b?sk=4daa398282362db0fbd8c420a1ca4602
9 days ago
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cherry blossoms in the breeze certificates flutter
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#childsfirstmarchhome
10 days ago
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yellow dust on red camellias... temple steps
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11 days ago
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spring breeze β song of skylarks above hand-painted signs
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12 days ago
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The Three-Minute Haiku System
A simple method for capturing haiku moments before they disappear.Most haiku begin with a moment that lasts only a few seconds:A bird call in the distance.A gust of wind through the trees.The sudden f...
https://markstuart.gumroad.com/l/3-Minute-Haiku-System
13 days ago
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after plum blossoms β sunbeams on the TV screen
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13 days ago
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thunderstorm clouds β after the ploughshare earthworms
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14 days ago
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roaring creek - diminuendo of sparrow song
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#monoku
15 days ago
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roaring creek - diminuendo of sparrow song
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#monoku
15 days ago
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frog song β rows of seedlings trampled weeds
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16 days ago
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spring thunder β the family still wash headstones
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17 days ago
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daydreams β the northern sky honks
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18 days ago
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spring wind β rhythm of monarchs heading north
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19 days ago
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melting snow β the morning she stops wearing black
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20 days ago
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bursting buds β the long walk in his new uniform
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21 days ago
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gathering herbs β between splashes of snow ants forage
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22 days ago
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hazy mountains β the father and his son different horizons
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23 days ago
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slack tide β the sound of silence on the radio
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24 days ago
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spring break β scattered aurora in each raindrop
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25 days ago
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water lilies β a dragonfly lands on its shadow
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26 days ago
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afternoon tea β in lengthening shadows the silence of birds
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27 days ago
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eagle nebula an owl hoots at her baby's first cry
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28 days ago
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winter solstice β an extra blanket on her double bed
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29 days ago
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swaying reeds β tai chi to the croak of frogs
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30 days ago
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cooling off β her basalt necklace on lace panties
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about 1 month ago
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I just published Rewritten Haiku #7:
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Rewritten Haiku #7
A lesson in juxtaposition and causation
https://medium.com/17-onji/rewritten-haiku-7-617e889d92d6?source=social.bluesky
about 1 month ago
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first warm sand a sidewinder's ripples
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about 1 month ago
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fjord's echoesβ salmon swim against meltwater
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about 1 month ago
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bomb crater forget-me-nots grow between headstones
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about 1 month ago
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canyon meltwater drowns his inner voice
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about 1 month ago
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ravine floor... first snowflakes on her photograph
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about 1 month ago
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even in Kyoto Buson's memorial shrouded in drizzle
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about 1 month ago
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forest canopy... her face ripples with sunbeams
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#komorebi
about 1 month ago
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embers in the hearth the year-old vase of roses
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about 1 month ago
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icicle β the last of my mother's childhood memories
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about 1 month ago
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monsoon lightning... the water droplets shimmer on her bare skin
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about 1 month ago
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unseen car purring quietly the cat on her lap
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about 1 month ago
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lava field the growing heat of her ringless finger
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about 1 month ago
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